After years of effort and a lot of reviews i decided to finally publish my first short horror tale. I remind you guys that it is part of a bigger proyect of mine which im writing, hope you enjoy it and dot doubth in pming me for any questions or sugestis. the link is posted on my info yet i will put it on this post
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